Update marketing/pwct/README.md - Better English!
@@ -41,10 +41,10 @@ Our goal is to provide a more powerful version of the software that satisfy two
(2) To be a better replacement for Textual Code Editors
-In the first generation we tried to do the same things, we did a lot of mistakes, we
-learned from them, we developed new ideas, and we implemented these ideas in PWCT 2.0
+In the first generation we tried to achive the same goals but, we did a lot of mistakes, we
+learned from them and developed new ideas then we implemented these ideas in PWCT 2.0
-I could be brave and say that after PWCT 2.0, I don't see any reason to use a Textual Code Editor
+I could be brave and say that after PWCT 2.0 development, I don't see any reason to use a Textual Code Editor
when developing Ring applications. The same could be applied for other textual programming languages when we
support them.
