Should I reorder my invitations?
Did you catch the mistake and what would you do?
I personally would reorder. The switch from first to third person would drive me nuts. I also hope the capitalization isn't like that on the invites, because it's not correct. Nothing should be capitalized except proper nouns and Because.
You can also drop off "in the afternoon" (no one will think you're getting married at 5am) and the 2015.
Saturday, the 20th of June sounds much better/more formal than Saturday, June 20th to me . Also, 4:45 is a atypical start time. You aren't planning on telling your guests to arrive 15 minutes before people actually start rolling down the aisle, are you?
Sentimental poetry and words like "happily request the presence" are not appropriate on the wedding invitation. They serve no purpose. Many people will find this cringe worthy. The inivtation is a simple note from the hosts to the guests telling them who, what, when and where - not WHY!
Of course, you can do what you want, but many people will side eye your invitations if you keep them like you have posted.