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Dear Ms Wagner, |
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I am writing this email to suggest some |
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things which should change adout school rules and |
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school program. I fermly: believe that it will |
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be better if school would less excosted |
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for students. |
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To begin with school program, which |
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could be smaller buring the day. In this way |
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Students will have much more time for their |
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hobies and this is important for teenagers. |
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Moreover, it would be helpful if educators |
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give to students less homework. As a result, |
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students will have better progress because |
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they will focus on homework better...! |
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Ferthemore it is vaitaly important for |
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our school to create educational programs out |
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of school day. If you will do this most students |
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would have the oportunity to solve their |
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questions and they will undertant better the |
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sudjects. In addision it will be a uniqe |
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expirience for students if school organize |
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educational trips more ofent. As a result |
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students will learn easier more things than |
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they will learn in a classroom. |
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In conclusion the changies in |
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school's rules and program could be |
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very helpful for students and their |
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education. I hope you find my suggestions |
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useful and I believe that our school will |
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be better. |
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Your sincely, Byron |