Mistake
Kim was at a traffic light. She could not see that light turn green due to the bright sun. People started honking at her. She finally noticed that the light had changed. Kim was a nervous wreck when she got home.
People started honking at her. Kim was at a traffic light. Kim was a nervous wreck when she got home. She finally noticed that the light had changed. She could not see that light turn green due to the bright sun.