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Ed felt sleepy in the early afternoon. He took a nap under a large tree. While he was napping, a great cloud covered the sun. He woke up and saw how dark it was. Ed thought that it was night time.
He took a nap under a large tree. Ed felt sleepy in the early afternoon. While he was napping, a great cloud covered the sun. Ed thought that it was night time. He woke up and saw how dark it was.