The weird edit.
Topher made a film for his film class. He was very proud of the editing. He aired the film in class, hoping that the people liked it. They all thought that the editing was not very good. Topher was upset, and left the class.
Topher made a film for his film class. They all thought that the editing was not very good. Topher was upset, and left the class. He aired the film in class, hoping that the people liked it. He was very proud of the editing.