Too dark
The bus arrived to my bus stop. Everyone got inside of the bus. The bus closed the door when I tried to get in. When I waved, the bus driver couldn't see me. I had to knock on the door for him to notice.
I had to knock on the door for him to notice. The bus arrived to my bus stop. When I waved, the bus driver couldn't see me. Everyone got inside of the bus. The bus closed the door when I tried to get in.