Also, please grade the essay based on the following rubric:

Thesis statement (20 points):

* Clear and focused thesis statement that sets the tone for the essay (15 points)
* Thesis statement is somewhat clear but could be more focused (10 points)
* Thesis statement is not clear or focused (5 points)

Organization and structure (20 points):

* Essay is well-organized and follows a logical structure (15 points)
* Essay is somewhat organized but could be improved (10 points)
* Essay lacks organization and clarity (5 points)

Use of evidence and examples (20 points):

* Essay provides strong evidence and examples to support the thesis statement (15 points)
* Essay provides some evidence and examples but could be improved (10 points)
* Essay lacks evidence and examples (5 points)

Analysis and interpretation (20 points):

* Essay demonstrates a deep understanding of the topic and offers insightful analysis and interpretation (15 points)
* Essay demonstrates some understanding of the topic but could be improved (10 points)
* Essay lacks understanding of the topic and offers weak analysis and interpretation (5 points)

Writing style and conventions (20 points):

* Essay is well-written and follows conventions of standard written English (15 points)
* Essay has some errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation but is still understandable (10 points)
* Essay has significant errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation and is difficult to understand (5 points)

Overall, the essay scored 60 out of 100.