Okay, here's the grading rubric for a 7th grade essay:

* Clear and concise thesis statement (10 points)
* Supporting evidence and details (20 points)
* Organization and structure (15 points)
* Writing conventions (15 points)
* Grammar and spelling (10 points)

Now, I'll grade your essay:

* Thesis statement: You have a clear thesis statement that takes a stance on the topic and provides a preview of your main points.