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This may be a little too specific, but am I allowed to omit particles with
verbs in haiku? Here’s what I wrote for context:

> この世界  
>  から逃げるとき  
>  **夢入る**
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Omission of particles in haiku
に before verbs such as はいる, 出る and 行く can be omitted in colloquial
conversation. Also in haiku, it can be omitted, but in this specific case, it
would be better use [いる](https://jisho.org/word/%E5%85%A5%E3%82%8B), a
literary version of はいる, and say 夢に入る【いる】.
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