I have a quick question about giving a reason for asking for a letter of
recommendation. I'd like to ask for a letter of rec from a Japanese language
teacher and also explain that I need it for a scholarship. This is not the
entire letter I will be writing, just a single sentence.

I was thinking:

> 私は奨学金が欲しいので、推薦状をお願いいたします。

I would like it to sound as natural as possible. Please let me know how I
might improve it.
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keigo
Giving a reason for asking for a letter of recommendation
Respectful language is in part about indirection, so rather than saying
"Because I want a scholarship please write me a letter" (which to me as a
native speaker of English who has written recommendation letters for students
sounds pretty rude), I'd say "I am planning to apply for the X scholarship,
and I was wondering if you could write me a letter".

My attempt is:

> 私はXの奨学金に応募しようと考えています。先生から推薦状を書いていただけないでしょうか。

or

> 私はXの奨学金に応募したいと考えています。先生から推薦状を書いていただけないでしょうか。
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this is coming rather late and i'm sure you've already asked for the letter
but for anyone else here to see the answers, I think it's pretty important to
state that you're better off asking for a letter of recommendation in person
(if at all possible), especially if the professor in question is a native of
Japan. Some may perceive requesting such a favor through email as extremely
rude (I've actually heard of someone getting thoroughly reprimanded by a
professor from Tokyo at my University for doing this). Just a word of caution!
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I'm in late on this one. The most natural way, as I've learned, is to approach
this by the back route on the subject. That is, rather than ask for a letter
of recommendation brusquely, use your tact to speak with them about the
scholarship. Therefore, when you write your email, don't make it about the
letter of recommendation, instead, make it about your specific goals, what
you're trying to achieve.

Once you're meeting with your professor in person, hint at the fact that a
letter of recommendation from them would be beneficial to your cause. Let them
decide that they can help you, and express gratitude at the fact that they
would be willing to help you.
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