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Saying that A leads to B leads to C in one single sentence.

I want to say フィードバックを回収すること **により** 、消費者の気持ちを理解する **ことで**
、企業はもっといい商品を出すようになる, but i dont know if this is grammatically correct?

Please also do share if you have any better alternatives, Thanks!
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How do you say A leads to B leads to C in one single sentence?
Yes, your sentence looks perfect to me. Using ～により or ～ことで twice in a single
sentence would have made your sentence look clumsy. You did a good job by
choosing a different expression.

Note that 回収 usually means collecting something physical. If this sentence
also covers online surveys, フィードバックを取得する might be better.
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