So, I recently decided to take a try at Japanese again. As such I decided to
jump right in to using the vocabulary I know in sentences to see how far I
could get. The following is what I came up with, I'll put the meaning I'm
attempting to convey in English beside the Japanese.

> これは僕の物語り！！！(This is my story [tale]!)  
>  けど、これはその男の物語りも。 (But, this is that man's story as well.)  
>  はい、そうです。 (Yes, that is true.)  
>  しかし、物語じゃない。(But, this is not a story.)  
>  これは君の未来！ (This is your future!)  
>  何？嘘ですね？(What? You're lying, right?)  
>  嘘じゃない。 (I'm not lying.)  
>  そう。。。わかりました。でも、僕？なんで！？(Okay...I understand. But, me? Why me?)

What I'm most concerned with is the sentence order and if it is
understandable. Not so much with if I could have left out a pronoun or
something along those lines. I know this is a lot to ask but thank you very
much to anyone who is willing to help!
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Help with Japanese sentence order