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Since subjects are very often ommited, I find it hard to identify whether I'm
reading a segment in the first person or the third person. What are the
patterns to look for to identify one or the other? Is it common to jump
between the two or are they generally the same throughout one book?

The question may seem broad, but this is a genuine question that learners will
ask themselves when tackling their first books. With speech or manga, it's
easy to know because people speak for themselves and use names or pronouns
when speaking in the third person. For other books such as novels, how do you
know if the text is the character speaking in first person or if it's the
narrator speaking in the third person.

I'm basically in the middle of a book and I still have no clue if I should
read "He attacked the merchant" or "I attacked the merchant".

* * *

I was asked to provide examples, here's the introduction of the novel:

> 記憶に鮮明なのは、紅蓮の炎にも似た紅い色――。 小振りの曲刀を横薙ぎに払うと、湿った布を裂くような音と共に鮮血が飛び散った。

My two translations:

  * There's something vivid in his memory, a red color also resembling crimson flames. With the horizontal sweeping of the smallish curved blade, there's a sound similar to a damp cloth tearing coupled with fresh blood splattered.

  * There's something vivid in my memory, a red color also resembling crimson flames. When I swept my smallish curved blade, there was a sound similar to a damp cloth tearing coupled with fresh blood splattered.

Up to that point, I still have no idea if it's someone talking about his
memories or a narrator.

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A bit later in the novel:

> その隙に、イルーシュは尻餅をついた体勢を立て直そうとしたのだが。

Here there is no doubt it's the third person but I don't know if it changed,
maybe because they're fighting and there's dialogue. I think it's one of the
only parts where he used his name. This is why part of my question was "is it
common to jump between the two?".

* * *

Let me rephrase the question to give another perspective: Should you consider
the text just like speech, meaning it's always first person unless there is
clear pronouns (this would mean it can change whenever), or do you assume a
point of view during the novel like in French or English? How do you approach
the point of view as a novel reader?
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How do you identify the point of view in Japanese (for novels)?
I know this is not going to be a comprehensive answer, but it’s too long to
fit in a comment anyway.

Specifically about your example, if the same person who swept the blade in the
first sentence is later referenced by their name, I would assume the first
sentence was also spoken from a third person’s perspective. (If イルーシュ is not
the one who swept the blade, on the other hand, the later sentence doesn’t
necessarily represent a switch of perspectives and both sentences could still
be part of a first-person narrative.)

Generally, I wouldn’t say it’s common to switch perspectives in one novel. I
would think a work that freely switches between first-person and third-person
modes would be considered a poor piece of writing.

I agree with you when you say it’s a genuine question. It somehow reminded me
of 雪国 by Kawabata Yasunari.

> 国境の長いトンネルを抜けると雪国であった。夜の底が白くなった。信号所に汽車が止まった。向側の座席から娘が立って来て、 **島村**
> の前のガラス窓を落した。  
>  
>  _「雪国」川端康成_

You would need to wait till you come across 島村 to know the novel is probably
not written from the first person’s perspective. Even then, it’s hard to tell
unless you already know 島村 is the name of the protagonist. Only after you
continue reading do you realize it’s indeed written from a third person’s
perspective. The definite key is in the absence, rather than the presence, of
something, namely the absence of a first-person pronoun.

Let’s look at another example.

>
> 親譲りの無鉄砲で小供の時から損ばかりしている。小学校に居る時分学校の二階から飛び降りて一週間ほど腰を抜かした事がある。なぜそんな無闇をしたと聞く人があるかも知れぬ。別段深い理由でもない。新築の二階から首を出していたら、同級生の一人が冗談に、いくら威張っても、そこから飛び降りる事は出来まい。弱虫やーい。と囃したからである。小使に負ぶさって帰って来た時、
> **おやじ** が大きな眼をして二階ぐらいから飛び降りて腰を抜かす奴があるかと云ったから、この次は抜かさずに飛んで見せますと答えた。  
>  
>  _「坊っちゃん」夏目漱石_

Although a first-person pronoun (おれ to be precise) doesn’t appear till much
later, you can still tell that this is a first-person narrative. One clear
sign is the use of おやじ, which is normally used to refer to one’s own father.
However, even before that, the absence of a name or a third-person pronoun to
refer to the subject in the very first sentence, as well as in later
sentences, makes you suspect that the person who is 無鉄砲 is the one talking.
(In comparison, it should be much easier to tell 吾輩は猫である is a first-cat
narrative…)

It’s hard to tell what exactly to look for, but how people are referenced will
definitely provide hints.
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