マリーと日本語を勉強 or マリーと一緒に日本語を勉強する ?

I just started learning kanji, so i'm not sure which one would be the correct
way to say this.

I'm trying to write "Studying with Marie"
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マリーと日本語を勉強 / Studying with Marie. Is this right?
マリーと一緒に日本語を勉強する ("I study Japanese together with Marie") is perfectly valid as
an ordinary sentence, but it's unnatural as the title of a website, a book,
etc. On the other hand, マリーと日本語を勉強 ("Studying Japanese with Marie") is much
better as a title, but it sounds too blunt and clumsy as an ordinary sentence.
Your kanji usage is fine.

There is still room for improving マリーと日本語を勉強. マリーと日本語 **の** 勉強 looks better
than your attempt because 勉強 can work as a simple noun. And マリーと学ぶ日本語 would
look even better and natural, and actually there are many books titled in this
pattern. The first three real examples I found on Japanese Amazon were:
"SNOOPYと学ぶアメリカ文化", "メイドと学ぶ商会経営" (NSFW) and "わかばちゃんと学ぶWebサイト制作の基本".
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