Grammatically speaking, is it correct if I translate

> During my two years stay in Japan, I have visited many places.

to

> 日本に住んでいた二年で、色々な所へ行きました

？
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Constructing phrase with "During"
Your translation looks already correct and natural. But I think it would be
even better if you use the [kanji
間](http://jisho.org/search?utf8=%E2%9C%93&keyword=%E9%96%93) and say like
this:

  * 日本に住んでいた二年【にねん】間【かん】で、色々な所へ行きました。
  * 日本に住んでいた二年【にねん】の間【あいだ】に、色々な所へ行きました。
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