I need a bit of help with my Japanese. If I want to say:

> Castle X is beautiful. Among all the castles in the world, castle X is the
> coolest.

Is this sentence written correctly?

> しろ Xの ほうが きれいで せかいの すべての しろの なかで、 しろ Xが いちばん かっこいい です。
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Need help with the superlative form of my sentence
Castle X is beautiful. Among all the castles in the world, castle X is the
coolest.

X[城]{じょう}はキレイです。世界[中]{じゅう}の[城]{しろ}の[中]{なか}でX[城]{じょう}が一番カッコイイです。

In Japanese, if the word is very common and the kanji is too complex to write
they write it using katakana, just as I did with キレイ and カッコイイ. This helps
kids and teenagers who usually know the word because they hear and use it all
the time, but are not very familiar with kanji.
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