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I'm working on a translation for a comic and I'm kind of stumped on this one
line. The specific context is the character talking to herself and musing
about what someone else thinks of her, the line in question being, "He's
probably going to think I'm crazy for worrying this much..."

I'm thinking it's 思っている because the topic of the sentence is still he, a third
person. Here's what I got so far, 彼は私がこんなに心配してるなんて、頭がおかしいと思ってるでしょう。 Is this
correct?

Also, two things. Can 多分 be used here along with でしょう or is it
incorrect/redundant? Like, ・・・多分頭がおかしいと思ってるでしょう。 I only ask because I've heard
多分 can't be used when assuming someone's feelings or thoughts. And two, is
頭がおかしい an appropriate expression for crazy in this context? Thank you.
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Translation help, 思う vs 思っている when the subject of the sentence is the speaker
The sentence

> 彼は私がこんなに心配してるなんて、頭がおかしいと思ってるでしょう。

as a translation of

> He's probably going to think I'm crazy for worrying this much...

is correct, as far as meaning or general acceptability is concerned.

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I think you are confusing some rules.

  * 彼は・・・と思う is usually odd.
  * 彼は・・・と思っている is common.

But

  * 彼は・・・と思うでしょう and 彼は・・・思っているでしょう

are both fine. So 思う/思っている is purely aspectual difference and it's your choice
which is better for the context.

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Regarding たぶん, 多分頭がおかしいと思ってるでしょう is fine. It is certainly odd to say
私はたぶん頭が痛い, which I guess the rule you have in mind is about.

Regarding _crazy_ , it looks ok (without context), but
[どうかしている](https://japanese.stackexchange.com/q/97713/45489) may be better. Or
maybe 変だ.

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Another option I can think of is to use a relative clause:
こんなに心配している私を、たぶん彼はどうかしていると思うでしょう. ( _He's going to think that I, who is
worried this much, is crazy_ )
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The dictionary form 思う shouldn't be used to talk about a third person, but
that's when you describe their current state of mind as in _He thinks ..._ in
English. What you want to say here is what (you think) he **is going to**
think. It's a future event, not a current state. The 〜ている form is
inappropriate for that. You should use the dictionary form.

> 彼は私がこんなに心配してるなんて、頭がおかしいと思うでしょう。

Adding 多分 is not a problem.

> 彼は私がこんなに心配してるなんて、多分頭がおかしいと思うでしょう。
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If it's literally a line that is supposedly spoken by a character (to
herself), you probably want to use a less rigid tone. Without pronouns like 彼
and 私, if possible. You can use the verb's passive form for that.

> こんなに心配していると、多分変に思われるだろう

I think 私 tends to be redundant in general in a monologue. 彼 is a bit more
tricky, but if the character is obviously thinking about "him", you don't need
to reaffirm that by mentioning it.
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