Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lawes is a product of Northampton Old Scouts, the same club that produced his former teammate Rob Milligan as well as Ben Cohen and Steve Thompson, amongst others.
Lawes is a product of Northampton Old Scouts amongst others. Northampton Old Scouts are the same club that produced his former teammate Rob Milligan as well as Ben Cohen and Steve Thompson.