Improve the consistency of the text: Staring idly at the family's barn one day, Jane gets the amazing idea for a Moffat Family Museum, to hold any first or treasured things the Moffat children can think of.
Jane stares idly at the family's barn one day. Jane gets the amazing idea for a Moffat Family Museum, to hold any first or treasured things the Moffat children can think of.