Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: His enemies, particularly de la Pole, also resorted to violent tactics. As a result, local gentry looked to Mowbray for leadership, but often in vain ; De la Pole was a powerful local force and favourite of the King, while Mowbray was neither.
His enemies, particularly de la Pole, also resorted to violent tactics. Local gentry looked to Mowbray for leadership, but often in vain ; De la Pole was a powerful local force and favourite of the King, while Mowbray was neither.