Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Eberling was later found guilty in the death of Ethel M. Durkin, a Cleveland area widow ; he also linked himself to the Marilyn Sheppard murder in Bay Village, in 1954.
Eberling was later found guilty in the death of Ethel M. Durkin in 1954. Ethel M. Durkin is a Cleveland area widow ; he also linked himself to the Marilyn Sheppard murder in Bay Village.