I liked the story, but it lacked the detail and depth that can be found in Tolkien and Rowling. A bit more story and it could reach their level easily. As it is, it will take the series as a whole to compete the depth if it goes on as is. A story should leave you wanting more, but this left me knowing I wasn't going to get any more from the first segment only the story as a whole would grow. It's a shame cause I think the author has created in this story a work that could have become a classic epic within the genre. Now, it's simply a good read that could have been great
I liked the story, but it lacked the detail and depth that can be found in Tolkien and Rowling