First thing is you have a beautiful voice. Seriously. It's great. The high notes, the low notes, the vibrato- it's all really great. TRUELY TRUELY PRETTY. And this song, very nice arrangment I really liked it. Great great beat. But the only thing I'm not digging is the lyrics. I got nothing out of them, really. And I should've got a little something out of them because I was really feeling your voice and the song. So, my helpful critisism is work on your lyrics.