the feel i get from this is what i would expect the offspring to be if pink floyd and the beatles got it on. its a nice relaxing song but for the length maybe a small guitar solo or piano solo here and there.  especially after the 5 minute mark, after the talking, would be sweet to have a nice smooth bluesy guitar riff to build back up to the chorus. someone earlier asked your influences and i definatly hear pink floyd and beatles in there. 2 great bands. keep up the sound i like it.