Good, you might want to look at publishing...nice key changes, and tempo changes as well. Keep composing, you have an extraordinary gift. The best songs, are the ones when you have taken smaller pieces, that you thought were exquisite or acceptional, and turn them into your personalized master piece...Id recomend an Electric Piano, the crossover would sound great on some good synthesizers, or pan leads. Over all, good song. 3/5. Bravo Tutti.