If you want an honest opinion... Its good. good lyrics... nice chord combination what ever who ever says. Its not the number of chords that matter but the combination and your imagination.But i think seriously you need to work on your vocals. It can improve... you need to add bit of clarity in it... and i think its doable. Any way i'd like to get to know you a bit. just write to me on rweerakkody at gmail dot com i have a couple of tips for you! So if you are interested(in music ok!)