neoma sucks!!!!!this isn't shit.I have written also slowly songs and know whats addictive.Maybe a little climax our something at the end :)Only people with feelings can like this one. I don't prefer this kind of songs but they have to been written to explore what were're feeling!The marilyn manson probably would hate this but how could they know whats good and what's not :/keep playing!!grts: Lsd!