um yeah, okay bear with me this is constructive criticism.  You have an okay voice nothing that stands out, the lyrics are also ok but aren't extremely catchy.  Your sound is bit like 90s female singers think of a paula cole or sarah mclachlin(sp?).  People may disagree with me but i just don't think you have a good enough singing voice to really be great, now i could be wrong but as of right now this song just didn't do it for me.