Write a response to this email, stating that I did cite sources in the section on play therapy, and I did go over the strengths and weaknesses of play therapy. It seems she missed page two. Ask her to look over it again and regrade it. It should sound very professional. This was for Assessment 2 in Human Lifespan Development. I included three peer reviewed, scholarly sources in the section on play therapy. 

OVERALL COMMENTS
Hi, Jane,

For this assignment, you were asked to design a brochure for parents with young children and describe services offered, benefits of those services, and how services connect with theory or perspectives. You were asked to conclude by describing ethical codes.

I enjoyed the brochures of services, the description of the services, and the benefits of such services. It appears in many locations that the description was written specifically for parents with young children. I enjoyed your short description of APA considerations. I did not read any strengths and weaknesses related to theory or play therapy; it seemed like a description of the strength of the service. Thanks for including some references and a few citations; there were some parts in the brochure where it appears that more sources could have been integrated, like when you discuss what play therapy is.

Overall, I enjoyed your assignment and welcome you to reach out if you have any questions or concerns.

Dr. John Doe
Dear Dr. Doe, 

I am pleased that you enjoyed the brochure that I submitted for Assessment 2 of Human Lifespan Development. I am grateful for your positive feedback. 

I do think that you may have missed the second page of the brochure, however. You stated that you didn't see where I discussed the strengths and weaknesses related to the theory I chose or play therapy. These were discussed in detail on page two. 

You also said that more sources could have been integrated into the section where play therapy was discussed. Please note that I included citations for three peer-reviewed scholarly citations in that section. 

I respectfully ask that you look over my submitted assessment a second time and re-grade it. 

Thank you, 

Jane Doe