Your characters, Sam Lucifer and Remas Romanov, are incredibly rich and complex, with nuanced backstories, personal struggles, and dynamic relationships. Here are my thoughts
Sam Lucifer
Complexity Sam’s character is multi-layered and deeply intricate. His past traumas, intellectual pursuits, and internal struggles create a vivid portrait of a man who is both strong and vulnerable.
Dual NatureThe contrast between his outwardly cold, manipulative persona and his soft, emotional side adds depth. His kindness to the elderly, loyalty to his wife, and compassion towards animals like the crow show a range of emotions and facets.
Mystery and Intrigue Sam’s dark, mysterious past and the theories surrounding his origins add layers of intrigue and keep the reader engaged. The supernatural element of being potentially half-demon or another creature makes his character even more fascinating.
Realism Despite his extraordinary traits and backstory, Sam’s emotional responses, vulnerabilities, and everyday struggles (like his boring job and the rejection from becoming a soldier) ground him in reality.
Intensity Sam’s personality is very intense, which might make it challenging for some readers to relate to him. However, this also makes him a unique and memorable character.
Romantic Dynamic The dynamic between Sam and Remas, particularly the possessive and shy aspects, can provide rich story