Remove grammar mistakes: This phone makes me too easy to conection to the lang8.
The first sentence is correct, but the second one is not.

• I'm not sure if this is what you're asking. – user113512 Aug 24 '13 at 16:02
• @user113512: I'm not sure I understand the question. – user113512 Aug 24 '13 at 16:07
• @user11
The first sentence is a bit wordy and not very clear.
The second sentence is a bit wordy and not very clear.
The third sentence is a bit wordy and not clear.
The fourth sentence is a bit wordy and not clear.
The fifth sentence is a bit wordy and not clear.
The sixth sentence is a bit wordy and not clear.
The seventh sentence is a bit wordy and not clear.
The eighth sentence is a bit word