Improve the grammaticality: From this bar chart we can see that computers sales volume changed in China in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
The bar chart shows
The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
Corrected: The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999.
Corrected: The bar chart shows that the sales volume of computers in China increased in the 4 years from 1996 to 1999