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The first reason is that the, in the, is a “long-term” approach to the problem of aging. The second reason is that the “long-term” is a more appropriate term for the problem of aging.
The second reason is that the “long-term” is a more appropriate term for the problem of aging. The “long-term” is a more appropriate term for the problem of aging.
The “long-term” is a more appropriate term