Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As the alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts, thus a press of button by the elderly would immediately transmit signal for help.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts, thus the alarm system would be directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The above is the correct way to write the sentence.
The correct way to write the sentence is:
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts, thus the alarm system would be directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The correct way to write the sentence is:
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts, thus the alarm system would be directly
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
The alarm system is directly connected to the relevant contacts.
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