Improve the grammar of this text: Instead of priming the spending on the aged as one of the key focus on our annual budgeting regularly, I strongly feel that the Singapore government should remedy its focus and divert its focus to other key areas such as military, urban development and education spending.
The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
Corrected: The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
Corrected: The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
The government should focus on the elderly, not on the military.
Corrected: The government should focus on the elderly
The government should focus on the aged and the military, urban development and education spending, and the elderly should be given more attention.
The government should focus on the aged and the military, urban development and education spending, and the elderly should be given more attention.
The government should focus on the aged and the military, urban development and education spending, and the elderly should be given more attention.
The government should focus on the aged and the military, urban development and education spending, and the