Improve the grammar of this text: If the country were to spend entirely caring for the aged, then many would shove responsibilities and indirectly many would also not care for their own health, since the healthy, represented by the country, would care for them.
If the country were to spend entirely caring for the aged, then many would shove responsibilities and indirectly many would not care for their own health, since the healthy, represented by the country, would care for them.
The second part of the sentence is a question. The question is: What is the country doing to the aged? The answer is: It is spending a lot of money on the aged.
Corrected: The country is spending a lot of money on the aged.
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If the country were to spend entirely caring for the aged, then many would shove responsibilities and indirectly many would not care for their own health, since the healthy, represented by the country, would care for them.
The second part of the sentence is a question. The answer is:
The country would not care for the aged because they would not care for their own health.
The correct answer is:
The country would not care for the aged because they would not care for their own