The first version there, is one that I did before I even looked at your, at at any of the homeworks, and I got myself into some awkwardness of trying to translate virtues, and ended up with beneficial properties, erm, which is hardly perhaps very idiomatic  and the one underneath that is Jemma's and the absent writer  not that she could be embarrassed because she's not here, erm, and she's actually simplified more than I have, by half a line, you'll understand.