text: Suz: We really need the information to flow this time. Can you re-write it?
  Dave: Sure, no problem. I thought it did flow, but...
  Suz: Just making the points from one paragraph to another.
  Dave: Yeah, like I thought that really did tie in well. Maybe not?
  Suz: Maybe you didn't communicate all your thoughts.
  Dave: True. I'll give it another read.
  Suz: Okay, plus also make sure each paragraph could stand on its own.
  Dave: Flow but be free standing?
  Suz: Yes.
  Dave: Okay, maybe that's why it didn't flow before.
  Suz: Could be. Read it through for flow then split it up. Tweak where necessary?
  Dave: I think that's a plan.
  Suz: Great. Need it by Thursday.
  Dave: Sure, no problem.
target: Dave will re-write the text on Suz's request by Thursday. 