text: Steve: I'm happy that you liked the story.
  Andy: Believe it or not but I did read it last weekend.
  Andy: Still need to read it again to be able to tell something constructive about it though.
  Steve: Just testing your dementia :P
  Andy: I may be old but not that old :P
  Andy: It just takes time to write something constructive especially after going through it only once.
  Steve: I appreciate that.
  Steve: That story was a transmutation of anther one that I had in my head for 10 years.
  Andy: You wrote it originally in Swedish?
  Steve: Yep.
  Steve: But the original idea was about an AI that was building a body for itself, android then human.
  Andy: Well I could tell it was translated, I didn't get that from the first one you sent.
  Steve: Oh no.
  Steve: That means there is still work to be done.
  Steve: I did fix some of the weird stuff but it seems that it wasn't enough.
  Andy: It's not easy to make a good translation as it takes time you would probably rather spend writing something new...
  Steve: Yeah and the text has a different flow when you create it instead of putting it through hoops.
  Steve: Got some new guides about writing from Amazon, so I'm planning to build my writing routine.
  Andy: And how is that working out so far?
  Steve: Well, got the books just yesterday, so haven't started yet :P
  Steve: But it seems like something I "should" do.
  Andy: Do or do not, there is no try :P
  Steve: You can't use SW against me, I'm gonna cry :P
  Andy: That will make your keyboard wet and prevent you from writing stuff :P
  Andy: So bad move ;)
  Steve: But the truth hurts :D
  Andy: That's why I'm here! Telling others to do things that I'm not going to follow myself ;)
  Steve: Another job well done ;)
target: Andy read Steve's story last weekend and he liked it. It was originally written in Swedish and the text gives it away, so there's still work to be done. Steve purchased some books about writing, so he should get better soon.