could you make this text formal, a little bit more succint, while still keeping the same structures and syntaxes that I wrote ? :
"My goals for my gap year project are the following : gaining knowledge through discovering a new culture and gaining knowledge while studying a new discipline in order to improve as an urban planning student. This is why, in order to complete my goals I have selected  the courses which would allow me to learn the mechanisms of economics and international law in order to have an impact on my future job opportunities. I attend, and would be truly grateful if I could, to go studying with the EDUC exchange program in the first semester of the year 2023/2024. In the second semester I attend to complete my professional experience with internships and interims opportunities in urban planning. I have already contacted employers, in my area, close to Rennes (Bretagne) such as “QUARTA NAME_1” and “Centre de Gestion de la Fonction Publique Territoriale d'Ille-et-Vilaine ». I have an appointments on the may 5th with “Centre de Gestion de la Fonction Publique Territoriale d'Ille-et-Vilaine », as I’ve told them that I intend to do a gap year in 2023/2024, they told me that my resume suited their needs and they could help me find an interim job in a city hall in “Ille-et-Vilaine”. I have also another appointments underway with “QUARTA NAME_1”.