eword the following making the story more intimate, erotic, taboo and sexy. Make the language babyish and loving: Mmm come on NAME_1. Come and have a lovely bath with me. Come and lay in my arms, between my legs with your head nuzzled on my breasts. You can have a little feel under the water if you like. I know your want to, my naughty little boy. But you're mummy's good boy, aren't you. You want to nurse on mummys lovely nipples, don't you. While Mummy strokes your hard little cock. I can see you've already got such a nice stiffy for me NAME_1. It's actually quite impressive your little baby willy can get so erect. Do I do that for you NAME_1? Does Mummys little soldier get a stiff little erection for her? Such a good little boy, NAME_1, showing Mummy how much you love her.

Now. Do as Mummy says and put your sweet little face between my boobs like you're a baby. Suck my nipples. Latch onto my nipple and suckle like a baby, NAME_1. Oh fuck, yeah! Good boy!!