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One night, Ivan and Jade were eagerly sucking on their beloved Daddy’s huge and manly cock.
Their hungry lips touching and rubbing against each other, competing to be the one to finally have the thick member all to themselves, without having to share it futhermore.
Suddenly, Ivan rudely pushed Jade to the side, taking Daddy’s cock all for himself, happily bobbing his head up and down, anticipating the white and thick male nectar that would soon fill his whole mouth, satisfying his thirst.
An irritated Jade glared at Ivan resentfully, but then she had an idea, unable to contain her mischievous smile.
She bent down behind Ivan and, after licking two of her own fingers, she suddenly thrust them right into Ivan's tight asshole, causing him to jolt in surprise.
At first, Ivan wanted to protest, but the large virile hand of his Daddy on his head urged him to suck harder and with more vigor, and all that came out of his mouth was an indistinct moan.
And deep down, Ivan enjoyed the feeling of Jade’s fingers rhythmically entering and exiting, sinking deeper into his anus that dilated increasingly, grateful to take them inside.
Now four of Jade’s fingers, excluding her thumb, sank into the boy’s well-dilated anus without any resistance.
The continuous friction and prostate stimulation were so intense that Ivan, without needing to masturbate with his hands, began to ejaculate copiously, and his cock (which had nothing to envy in matter of size to the one he still held in his mouth) starting to squirted his semen everywhere as it convulsed in the rhythmic and irreprimibile contractions of the male orgasm.
Suddenly, gasping for breath, an Ivan reluctantly moved away from Daddy’s hand, panting and struggling to speak, his voice hoarse from the titanic effort he had just undergone, and he exclaimed: “Enough! I can’t take it anymore... Daddy please… give it to me, put it in my ass!!!”
The man promptly responded to his stepson’s request, and after grabbing him and turning him around, he quickly buried his thick manly cock in Ivan’s pulsating anus, that was ready and happy to receive it.
For the following minutes, there was nothing for Ivan but the intense and supreme pleasure caused by the powerful, rhythmic, and fast thrusts of his stepfather sodomizing him.
Jade then, watching the two males engaged in their only-male game and still unsatisfied, decided to join them, and after kneeling in front of Ivan, she began to vigorously masturbate him with both hands.
And as Jade jerked off Ivan’s cock, she taunted him: “You like Daddy’s big cock in your ass, huh? You like it, fag, isn't?”
And Ivan, ecstatic, and at the height of happiness, joyfully replied: “Yes! YES!!! I like it, I LIKE IT SO MUCH!!!”
And as he said it, he ejaculated abundantly all over Jade’s face, who eagerly held her mouth open and her tongue out to receive it.
One orgasm after another, Ivan’s seed covered the Jade’s face, filling her mouth, while she drank it like from a fountain, enjoying every drop as if it was sweet honey, while it dripped down her chin and over her small, budding breasts, and even further down, on her flat stomach, now finally satiated.