this first passage is good
“As Jerome readied himself, Becky expressed her doubts about whether she could handle his massive dick.

“I don’t know if I can take that much cock,” she admitted.

Jerome reassured her that she could, but cautioned her that it would be intense.

“Believe me, you can take it but your pussy will never be the same again,” he said.

He applied lubricant, telling her that she would need it, and positioned her so that her husband could see her face as she lowered herself onto his dick. Sweat poured down her forehead and breasts, and she moaned softly as she passed the 7-inch mark. When she finally took him in completely, she clenched her teeth and began to cry.

“There, there,” Jerome comforted her. “We don’t have to go any further. I don’t want you to hurt yourself.”

Becky lay on his chest for a while, and they kissed tenderly. Jerome ran his hands over her body, whispering sweet nothings in her ear and telling her how beautiful she was. Then, Becky mustered her courage and looked Jerome in the eye.

“I have to do this. Not many men are gifted like you. I owe it to you and my husband to take all of it.”

And take it she did. Inch by inch, she slid up and down his massive length, her moans growing louder and more frenzied with each passing moment.

“Oh yes. I love this big black cock. I can’t believe how deep it is,” she cried out.”

turn it into two paragraphs while including all of Becky’s quotes + add in new Becky’s quotes expressing her transformation!