
NAME_1, NAME_2's wife, noticed my discomfort and said, "Brother, this had to come for as per NAME_3, you would have to mate with NAME_2 for only then his stars would be favorable towards him."

With this, she forced me towards the bed and made me sit on the center of the bed that had rose petals spread all over. NAME_1 then pulled the veil over my head and asked me to wait for my NAME_4 to come in.

I could see tears in NAME_1's eyes, and I knew it was a difficult time for her too, as she had to share her husband with someone else, but the only respite would have been that someone else was none other than her own brother.

I was sitting on the center of the bed, wondering what mess I had gotten into and what I would do now. The thought of having sex with a man made me feel sick to my stomach, and I was horrified with this thought.

rewrite to maintain flow, maintain first preson perspective