Proofread this please : "Please send a thank you to the academic director and housing director for meeting with me today! Also, thank you again NAME_1 for allowing me to meet with you and tour the facility. I was very impressed by the way things were being ran, as well as the overall cleanliness of the school. I'm unsure if you have a sales or marketing team fully in place but I would also like to assist in this area bringing in more students to the school part time or as needed. The more prospective students the better and I feel like NAME_2 is a hidden gem that more people should know about. If the waiting list for this school is not filled up on a yearly basis, there is definitely potential that needs to be filled. However please consider me for whichever position is most needed. You're doing an excellent job with the school, thank you!

Regards,
DP"