 Revise my text by adding more creativity, a touch of mild erotica, and less appropriate words to increase the spice of the text. Describe seductive actions in a creative way without adding too much text, while still maintaining the originality of the story. Replace words and phrases with more provocative language to create a heightened sensual atmosphere. Think of vivid descriptions that will evoke a strong emotional response from the reader. ''I fucked my girl in the doggy style holding her hair and choking her from behind and fucked her hard. I never saw someone so nasty. She was getting dirty and asked me to spit on her and drip the saliva into her mouth. She would lick my cum from my fingers looking deep into my eyes. I knew that my girl was some horny woman and I felt lucky.''