Revise my erotic story segment with a heightened level of creativity and a subtle touch of sensuality. Replace appropriate words with more provocative choices to maintain the alluring essence of the text. Additionally, craft enticing descriptions of seductive actions in a more imaginative manner, while keeping the length of the text manageable. Ensure that the originality of the story remains intact throughout the rephrased version. Feel free to enhance or modify the prompt further to achieve the desired outcome 

''I fucked mom in the doggy style holding her hair and choking her from behind and fucked her hard. I never saw someone so nasty. She was getting dirty and asked me to spit on her and drip the saliva into her mouth. She would lick my cum from my fingers looking deep into my eyes. I knew that my mom was some horny woman and I felt lucky.''
