Rewrite an improved version of the quote in brackets to be more descriptive, and in the erotic horror style(But when the beast found out about our sneaking out, they came with a fury. One night, while I was wandering around the island, I stumbled upon the aftermath of one such raid. The pirates were hanging from tree branches by their impaled bodies, and their organs had been dropped to the ground in a sickening display of violence.
In the harbor, the pirate boats were set ablaze, and large carts filled with crates and chests lay abandoned on the beach. I followed my curiosity deeper into the carnage, searching for answers as to what had happened. That's when I saw her - a woman fighting for her life in the water.

As NAME_1 fought for her life in the waves, the beast closed in on her, their razor-sharp claws tearing at the water as they approached. In a swift motion, she sliced one of them deep across the throat before firing off her revolver at another who had charged towards her. The beasts let out bloodcurdling screams as they backed away in fear, giving NAME_1 time to catch her breath.
But they were not done yet. They moved faster and more aggressively than I'd ever seen, cutting the distance between them and NAME_1 in under a minute. She fought with all her might, swinging her sword to deflect strike after strike. But it was clear that she was outnumbered and outmatched.
After what seemed like hours of fighting, they overpowered her and dragged her back to the mess of NAME_2 and death. I watched as they pulled away her clothing, revealing her exposed breasts and womanhood. Her body was open to the fresh air and to the dozens of erect cocks that surrounded her. Some were already stroking, while others were almost alert and bulging out of their pants with desire. The horned figure towered over his kin, but what I noticed above all else was the throbbing large cock that twitched and already dripped with pre-cum.
The beast took a firm grip on her legs and spread them apart, exposing her womanhood for all to see. NAME_1 tried to get away, pulling at the binds that held her in place, yet she was too slow. The beast took a firm grip on her legs and spread them apart as the tip of his cock made contact with her lips.
The sight was truly something to witness, I remember that wet feeling between my legs at the sight every single time she has a load blown deep within her left me craving that feeling myself. Maybe im twisted in the head but i don’t care. All I know now is that today is the day ive been selected for that lottery wh