We entered the room and NAME_1 softly placed me on the bed and then immediately started kissing me, first it was slowly and then it became more passionately. I was reciprocating him and it looked as if NAME_1 would eat me up. Then the focus shifted and NAME_1 started to take my clothes off, as I was dressed in Bridal attire so it took some time and he was getting impatient and then I too helped him to undress myself. Now I was standing in just a red satin bra and a red satin lace panty. I was not feely shy for I was a man and elder brother-in-law and standing in just a bra panty in front of another man, I was in fact reveling in this glory and was waiting for NAME_1's next move.

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