correct my letter my formal letter Dear Ms. Prather,

I am writing to express my interest in the "Fast Track Calculus" program at Rose-Hulman Institute of Technology. I am a current high school student and have always been passionate about mechanical engineering mathematics. I believe that the "Fast Track Calculus" program would be the perfect for me with the opportunity to further develop my skills and gain a competitive edge in my future academic pursuits. knowing first hand how valuable mathematics when i was involved with the STEM program VEX Robotic I put my entire heart into. With my VEX Robotic experience i wanted to prove to my self and to  prove to everyone else that I could be one be one of the best in Indiana that goal quickly change to being one of the best in Indiana to one of the best in the world. accomplishment I wrote a fully autonomous program for my robot that ran a PERFECT run at VRC VEX Robotic Worlds competition. I achieved 7th in the world There was a 8 way tie for first place and by tie breakers i got 7th. I was so proud of what i accomplished and got to really to see how important mathematics.  I love Tough challenges and when i saw this class i was totally excited to see how i could be with a lot of like minded people. I have been advised by almost a dozen different Rose-Hulman graduates they was parents of kids in the VEX Robotic program and they ALL say Martin you are a ROSE person you think and act like a rose person.
So i started to look at Rose-Hulman.
I would like to request more information regarding the program and the application process. Specifically, I would like to know the eligibility criteria and the deadlines for submitting an application. Additionally, I would appreciate any advice on how to prepare for the program.

 I feel like I have learned  a lot of things but i think the biggest different thing between me and other kids i have accomplished  So much in a short period of time here is a few examples in the VEX Robotic and achieving 7th in the world the first year having my own team. I played the Harp for over 11 years I am a concert level harpist. I already have 2 different internships set up while i go to collage I am eager to learn more about the program and look forward to hearing back from you. Thank you for considering my request.