NAME_1 chanted a lot of mantras and then a paste of yellow turmeric powder with sandalwood powder was applied to my body and then it was washed with the holy waters. 

All my family members excluding NAME_2 was watching this and then a curtain was drawn around me and then I was asked to remove the white cloth and a white silk saree with dark red border was draped around me as a saree and my ears were pierced and I was then made to wear a gold earring. (elaborate on this process)

 and thus NAME_1 pronounced, "You are now a Girl, and thou shall live your life as a righteous girl and wife."

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