these are the two revised versions of the text

First version: Mom: Oh yes, my love. Fuck me, fill me with your hard, throbbing rod. Slide it inside my slick, quivering channel. I need you, baby. Your touch sets me on fire. Make love to me, my darling. Make me feel alive.

Second version:"Oh yes, my darling, fill me with your throbbing member. Your hard, pulsing cock feels so deliciously in my tight, clenching sheath. I ache for you, craving the fullness you provide. Take me, claim me, make me yours."

by referring to and analyzing the above two revised versions, create the best-revised version of the text in simple English words by collecting erotic and seductive scenes from each revised version without increasing the text length too much