I am a student of IELTS examination, I will give you my writing article with title, please complete the following tasks.
1.You should give me an overall score according to the IELTS criteria and explain the scores for each criteria.
Here is the title and my article
Title: People are surrounded by advertising and there is an increasing effect on our lives.Do you think positive effects outweigh the negative effects?
My article:
Nowadays, people are surrounded by advertising and there is an increasing effect on our lives. While I accept that these advertisements can sometimes have a negative effect on our life, I believe that they are more likely to have a positive impact.
On the one hand, our lives are bombarded with advertising. 
Firstly, advertising is an important marketing tool in many companies. They use advertisements to show their products to customers. It can boost the sales of the advertised products and contribute to the profit of the companies. Secondly, advertisments provide people with more choices in shopping. It can present product’s information including its appearance, feature and price. As a result, based on the advertisements, consumers can decide what to buy easily. From the employment perspective, advertising is a creative industry that needs to employ many people and offer more job opportunities. Furthermore, it also reduces unemployment.
Although it has some benefits, it still has drawbacks. Firstly, advertising manipulates our consumption consciousness. We are persuaded to follow new trends and fashions. For example, a new technology come out such as the iPhone leading to many people who purchasing it even if they do not need it. Secondly, children are easily influenced by advertising. For instance, some advertising aimed at children such as junk food and toys. These advertisements also encourage them to buy more snacks. Junk food affects children’s health resulting in obesity problems. Finally, these more purchases can put pressure on parents in low-income families.
In conclusion, it seems to me that advertisements is significant benefits more negative in our lives.