change this into a dialog format. He: action A, She: action B. Change the pronouns so they refer to each other as you, I, my, your. No more she/he her/his "She continued bounding hard and fast. She grabbed my hands and placed them onto her tits, then dropped one hand down and began to rub her clit back and forth. Although the pain was definitely there, there was a new excitement that was there from her newfound turn on. As she rode me even harder, I began to squeeze her tits. I let one hand drop to the small of her back and work its way down to her ass cheeks. "