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I have chosen these research areas based on my passion for space exploration and my desire to contribute to its advancement. My interests, strengths, and dream career have influenced my ranking of the research areas, and I also took into account the opportunities and impact that each field could offer, as well as their alignment with my hobbies.

I prefer Planetary science as my first choice because it is essential for understanding the fundamental processes (physical, chemical, and biological) that shape our solar system and how the universe is formed. I am interested in studying planetary surfaces and atmospheres and how they interact with other celestial bodies. This field of research offers a unique perspective on the origins and evolution of planetary systems as well as the possibility of finding life on other planets. Space exploration is a fascination of mine, so it is very important for me to consider studying and researching planetary and space science and the search for extraterrestrial life. It is also an intriguing field because it combines both science and engineering and allows me to apply my analytical and problem-solving skills to find unique solutions to real-world challenges.


My second choice is Space Systems Design and Engineering, which is appealing to me because the designing and developing process of space systems involves creating subsystems and integrating them to achieve a unified result. I am excited about contributing to the development of the design and engineering of spacecraft. I believe that by focusing my efforts on this area too, I will be able to contribute to the creation of innovative spacecraft designs and the optimisation of various aeronautical and space systems. Understanding space system design and engineering is important for advancing our understanding of space and enabling future missions. The fundamental goal of Space Systems Design and Engineering is to ensure that each spacecraft subsystem cooperates coherently to carry out the mission's objectives, which is something that also interests me.


My third choice, Space Navigation, Dynamics, and Control, is also concerned with spacecraft, and it is the most crucial one for developing reliable and efficient technologies for spacecraft navigation and control systems. This field requires a great understanding of engineering and physics, and I would like to apply my knowle