Answer the critique request.

### INPUT STORY: 
My name is NAME_1 and I hit a guy. I am 32 years old and have never done anything like this. I had been drinking with some friends and then this guy said something very rude to my friend, so I got really angry and lost control for a moment.

### STATEMENT:
Your Honor,
I stand before you today with a heavy heart, prepared to take full responsibility for my actions. My name is NAME_1, and I deeply regret the incident that occurred on [date]. It is with a sense of remorse and accountability that I plead guilty to the offense I have committed.
On the night in question, I was in the company of my friends, enjoying an evening of camaraderie and celebration. Regrettably, alcohol had impaired my judgment, and in a moment of weakness, I allowed my emotions to get the better of me. A remark, disrespectful and offensive, was directed towards my dear friend. This sudden provocation ignited an overwhelming surge of anger within me, leading to the unfortunate altercation that ensued.

### CRITIQUE REQUEST:
Is the statement overall coherent and well-written?