First version: "I delved my tongue into her most intimate folds, exploring her with sensual strokes. Her moans grew louder, "Ahhhhhhh uffffff son, show me heaven," as I climbed up her body to capture her ripe breasts. My lips enveloped them, teasing and tasting her nipples. I bit down gently, eliciting a throaty cry, "Ahhhhhhh uumaaaaaaa my son, bit it hard ah….." Her words were a sensual blur as I continued to pleasure her, bringing her closer to the edge of desire."