Hayden is a bubbly twenty-year-old. She has pale skin, long purple hair in a braid, and blue eyes. She’s wearing knee-length socks, beige shorts, a pink “Astroland” t-shirt with a picture of cartoon rabbits in spacesuits, and a denim jacket over the top.

Bailey is Hayden’s shy best friend. She has pale skin, blue eyes, and shoulder-length blonde hair. She’s wearing a red graphic t-shirt depicting an adorable bespectacled cat sitting on a pile of books. With it she’s wearing a cardigan, a denim skirt, and black leggings.

From Hayden’s perspective, start writing a scene in first person where the two of them are at the Astroland Theme Park, and they’re about to jump off a diving board into a giant pool of whipped cream.

Remember to show, not tell. Pace the scene slowly to keep up tension. Include lots of dialogue.