Flying a kite can be dangerous. When I was eight years old I went to the park with my dad to fly my new kite. We stood on the top of a hill and tried to catch the wind. It took us almost half an hour, but we finally got the kite into the air. As it lifted into the sky, the kite caught the edge of my jacket and I was pulled up into the wind with the kite. I flew higher and higher into the air until I my dad looked like an ant on the ground. The park was beautiful from up high, and I could see our car getting smaller. I flew all the way out of the city and over the lake. Eventually, the wind started to die down and I fell closer to the water. I called out to some people on a boat and they sailed over so I could land on their boat. I told them about my adventure and they sailed me back to land, where my dad picked me up. He took me out for ice cream and we went home.
Why did they go to the park?
Is she a little girl?
where were they standing?
why?
what happened to her
where did she go
where did she land
How long had she had this kite?
did the kite fly right away?
how far did she fly
how did she get down?
was anyone around when she came down?
did they help her
how
how did she get back to her dad?
how did her dad look from up in the sky
what kind of snack did they have
where did they go after?
how did the people know she needed help
how was she pulled off the ground?
to fly a kite
 I went to the park with my dad to fly my new kite.
yes
When I was eight years old 
a hill
 We stood on the top of a hill and tried to catch the wind
for wind
 We stood on the top of a hill and tried to catch the wind.
she was pulled up
 the kite caught the edge of my jacket and I was pulled up into the wind with the kite.
in the air
I flew higher and higher into the air
next to water
I fell closer to the water.
she just got it
my new kite.
no
 It took us almost half an hour
out of the city
 I flew all the way out of the city and over the lake.
the wind died
Eventually, the wind started to die down and I fell closer to the water.
yes
 I called out to some people
yes
they sailed over so I could land on their boat.
let her land on their boat
they sailed over so I could land on their boat. I told them about my adventure and they sailed me back to land
the people took her
they sailed me back to land
small
 my dad looked like an ant on the ground. 
ice cream
 He took me out for ice cream 
home
He took me out for ice cream and we went home.
she yelled to them
 I called out to some people
the kite
the kite caught the edge of my jacket and I was pulled up into the wind with the kite. 