Create a scene from a Western where an outlaw walks into a bar and asks for a drink. Make sure there is suspense and intrigue in the scene. Though no one fires a gun.
Create a scene from a Western where an outlaw walks into a bar and asks for a drink. Make sure there is suspense and intrigue in the scene. Though no one fires a gun.
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It had already been a hard day and a long night when the door to Jaywick's saloon swung open. At the door stood a tall man. The brim of his tan hat covered his eyes, and a poncho draped around his shoulders. The wind whistled through the bar bringing in a flurry of snow with it. Jaywicks watched the man as he moved slowly towards the bar. He was hunched over dragging something heavy. Setting down the glass he had been cleaning, Jaywick leaned over the bar top to survey the man's burden. 
"He dead?"
"Ought to be. I put six shots of lead into him." Hardwick nodded as he picked up the glass and continued to clean it. 
"And why exactly did you feel the need to drag a dead body into my bar on this winter's night?" The man placed a dull coin on the bar and gestured towards a bottle of whisky on the shelf behind the barman. Hardwick thought for a second before placing down the whisky glass and filling it. He slid it over to the man. He thought it better not to deny the gentleman the simple pleasure of a drink. After all, maybe the frozen corpse on the floor was the last bartender to turn him down. 
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