|Reviews for Ideas of Desertion|
| Cloak-of-Shadows chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Ahh... a perspective poem. Really conveys the thoughts of a deserter who is having second thoughts about the purpose of the fight. The italicized we and just-, putting emphasis on those two words... when I read those two lines to myself, emphasizing those words, it seems to break the momentum of the poem slightly. It's nothing big, great poem.