Question: Can someone word a thesis well for me about this...? It needs to be an although because thesis statement and my current crappy thesis is this:\nAlthough many people associate Puritanism with immorality, because their ideas are still prevalent in society, that is why the government is controlled by the Puritan way.

Answer: I think its "Although many people associate Puritanism with immorality, the government is controlled by the Puritan way because Puritanism ideas are still prevalent in society."
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