Question: i started writing a story i wnna know if it is good? Prologue\n I am about to let ya?ll  in on a story about a promiscuous R&B singer. Her name was naughty princess she was a young artist. Her real name is Desireer. She has only been in the business for 2 years going on her 3rd.  What is so special about this gurl is that she is famous but she likes to move around  a lot and every where she meet she meet a new boy. At her first house she meet Jarad. At the second house she meet Meecko. Now she is at her 3rd house and she has meet Kajay. Some people have other names for promiscuous  gurlz, but u will here bout them later. Well  I am her sister  Dyiana. I?m a world top model and on the runway the call me diamond. Me and my sister are twins who are always together.\n\nBEGINNING\nIt wuz here 2nd  day at here new house and she was out side walkin when she saw Kajay. The first thing she thought was ohh lala. (what price do I get today). So she decided to walk out side with her lil tiny shorts on and a white back out an some heels.  I on the ot

Answer: Boring!!!!!\nAfter you learn how to spell, & form proper sentences, try writing from your own experiences, not a fantasy you know nothing about.\n\nIf I were your Grade 8 English teacher I would give you a C minus if I was in a generous mood.\n\nGood? I'm afraid not.
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