Question: ANY OPINIONS?? please answer!!!? Okay another song i wrote...i think its okay but this is the first song i ever wrote without rhyming it in the verses, but everyone here tells me to stop rhyming for once so i tried it...is it good??\n------------\n\n[verse 1]\nIt's Not The Way You Look At Me\nIt's The Way You Present Yourself\nI've Never Seen This Side Of You\nPlease Stop Your Faking Now\n---------------\n\n[verse 2]\nDream Of A Better Day\nComing Around The Corner\nJust Maybe, You'd Need This\nTo Help You From Your Fall\n------------------\n\n[chorus]\nI Love You\nBut You Don't Love Me Back\nI Hate You\nHate's Not Something You Lack\n-----------------\n\nAnd Here I Am Again...\n------------------\n[\nverse 3]\nI'm Drunk Off Your Kiss\nNow This Needs To Stop\nBut Will You Hold My Hand?\nOnce More Before I Leave?\n--------------\n[verse 4]\nI Didn't Mean To Start This\nBut I Died Over Your Kiss\nYou Stole Something I Need Back\nWon't You Give My Heart Back?\n[chorus again]

Answer: seems better than most of the crap that I hear
This question from the Yahoo Q&A forum is categorized in the topic: Business & Finance