Question: Does anyone like this poem?American Soldier? I wrote this poem,and,I also write songs,let me what know what you think?(Its copyrighted)\nIn dark lonely tunnels My mind goes astray Hope against hope I`m ready for this day Missles,sirens,smoke,and,debri My hearts pounding wildly as I fight to stay free Sweat grime,and,sand are stuck to my skin My clothes hang on loosely cause,I`ve gotten so thin I`m a father,a husband,a brother,or,son I wish I could leave this place,but,our work here is`nt done So think of me write to me,and, pray for me too I`m a American soldier for the red white,and,blue

Answer: I like this poem very much. It says exactly what a soldier must be feeling. I especially like the part that says "My hearts pounding wildly as I fight to stay free. Sweat, grime, and sand are stuck to my skin. My clothes hang on loosely cause I've gotten so thin. I'm a father, a husband, a brother, or son." I think that sometimes people forget that our soldiers are somembody's father, brother, or son instead of just an American soldier. This is well-written. Have you thought of setting it to music or putting it in a book with other poems like this that you write? I believe that it would sell. I certainly would read a book like that.
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