Question: is any body into poetry( what do you think of my poems)please be honest.? dont love you.\n\ni want his arms around my waist \nand cuddle him and touch his face\nto feel his lips so soft and fine\nand hold him 4eva and make him mine\ni'll make an oath from my heart\nswearingwe shall never part\nand i will never ever lie till i die\n\ni still want his arms \naround my waist\nfor him to love me and feel\nhis warm imbrace\ni love you theres nothing you\nor i can do \nits hard when you love someone\nand they dont love you.\n\n\nhold me tight.\n\nyour my star\nmy star of light \ncurse my soul into thee night\ncome reasue me be my knight\ncurse my soul into thee light\ncome reasue me again\nand hold me tight.

Answer: I liked the first and part of the last verse, but the rest of it seems to just fall off. almost as if you are trying too much,
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