::::::::::::::It's looking very good to me. I think there's some extra stuff from the Curtiss book that I think will be worth including, for example, in terms of the picture of the family situation.  But I haven't got the book with me at present, so it will have to wait till the weekend. 
 ::::::::::::::As far as the other question is concerned, I'm really not that well versed with what would be considered fair use, but based on what I know I'd be a bit worried about whether it would qualify.  We'd need to have something quite a bit more about her pictures, and show that it was essential to understanding the subject.  There is stuff in the Curtiss book about them, but I'm not sure how much.  Once again I'll take a look in few days and see what there is.