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 :: I changed the term ""recording artist"" with ""rapper"". Even though, both are interchangeable. She is a recording artist, as she records her artistry, which so happens to be ""rap"". This applies in the same way that a singer is a recording artist. It is just a more broad term, as Iggy does record some of her own hooks, labelling her as just as rapper is actually rather insulting to her other many talents. But, it is not important. The ledge opener is fine, the same information you have just put is all there, just in a more professional and encyclopaedic structure. I have just looked over the ledge you have provided and will try my best to create a merger incorporating the best of both.   "