This would fail a creative writing class.
Maybe I don't have the same youthful imagination I had in my younger years, and call me a no-fun-nelly, but the idea of a dog that wags its tail when it wants to say yes and bark when it wants to say no is just not all that inventive to me. Put a killer baboon into this mix, and you pretty much have the premise to the Watchers. Yes I'm being serious.If this thoughtful plot wasn't enough to keep you engaged, then surely the Shakesperianesque communications will seize your attention, as this completely random portion of the book will demonstrate:"Cake and Pie," one of the young men said."Cake and Pie," the other echoed.Nora frowned, not understanding."Piece of cake," one of them explained."Easy as pie," the other said."Cake and pie," Nora said, nodding.For all the comments that are sure to attach to this review, keep in mind, YES I do think I can do better, and hopefully one day I will.~ActionSam