text: . @LIZZIE191234 and @PEPPY you are in the chapter
  Susan's story chapter 10: new friends
  I walked into the dorm and found my room mates already inside.
  "You seam tired," Piper said
  "Have you heard of what happened at one of the surviving fairy tales classes?" Juliet asked
  "I was in that class," I said,"My friends and I are trying to find out what happened."
  "What, you're in that class," Piper said astonished
  "Ya, but my dad told me not to pay atenshion to it," I said
  "By the way we never talked about our families. I'm the daughter of jack and briar rose." Juliet said
  "I never new my father but my mother is the little match girl," piper answer
  "I heard they where nice, my parents are snow white and prince charming, but my mother died when I was ten. three months after my brother and sister where born," I said,"How about we go to the groom room, I think I can we all have high scores so we can go in," We all went to the groom room and relaxed in the spa and talked about our lives and became friends.
  "I never knew* my father" Knew not new. Also, don't forget to capitalize the word after a period. Other than that cool chapter. 😉