text: First Submission Critiqu...
  First Submission Critique : Breaking Bad WIP
  Before I actually submit my design to Teefury (which would be the first sub for me) I wanted to get some opinions on what the design needs. I've been debating the color scheme which is why it's currently in grayscale. However an earlier version I created had an icy blue-faced Walt (to match the product) which is still a possibility.
  https://www.dropbox.com/s/gpjzr8dcpcdqegl/BB_Walt.jpg
  And the bordered version
  https://www.dropbox.com/s/vkyaweulwe66czv/BB_Walt_Alt.jpg
  Suggestions and comments on the possible color choices or overall design are welcomed!
  Post a comment Pattywagon96 weeks ago
  This is great, and I'm not even a fan of the series. The border makes the colors seem deeper. Keep it--it makes it feel more complete.
  ShayLei96 weeks ago
  Thanks, Pattywagon! I appreciate it.
  RiteGuyShirt96 weeks ago
  That... is flat out amazing skill. I LOVE it!
  Thanks a bunch! I'm thinking about adding the collar and a bit of the hood from his haz mat suit and possibly adding some beakers in the middle ground to make it feel more complete. origamiP96 weeks ago
  Fantastic! Such a great design! I love the show and would buy this on a shirt in a heartbeat! Personally I like the first design, without the border, because it would look more cohesive with a shirt. But they're both just amazing! Also, I think it would almost benefit with more variety with the elements of the periodic table in the background. ShayLei96 weeks ago
  Thanks for the comment and the suggestion, origamiP! Having a mixture of various elements was something that I started playing around with but took out at the last minute. Now that you've mentioned it though, I'm going to add them back into the latest version and see how it looks. Thanks again for the help!
  Side Note: I LOVE your avatar. PvZ was and continues to be a favorite of mine.
  I made the final adjustments to my design, and now it's a WIP no more! Thanks to everyone for all of your comments and suggestions. See the final version below.
  https://www.dropbox.com/s/qq6x84fsoo63krz/BB_Walt_640.jpg
  Big J96 weeks ago
  That is awesome, I'd buy that for sure.
  ireneadler96 weeks ago
  I'd buy this is a heartbeat. The artwork is gorgeous. I love the lines of his face. ShayLei96 weeks ago
  Thanks everyone! Here's to hoping it gets printed. *fingers crossed*
  kgullholmen96 weeks ago
  really great design ... nice work on the lines and shadows
  the only thing I'd have to "criticize" would be that it looks as if Walt has a weird hairdo or his head on fire in the last version. not sure about that. but it's still very very good.
  I made one for Jesse btw ;D
  'cuz I like Jesse
  heyboova95 weeks ago
  Awesome! I definitely need a breaking bad shirt.
  bufkin95 weeks ago
  Great work! I would most definitely buy this! Rhymo95 weeks ago
  Looks really great! I personally think the borderless one would look better when printed on a shirt, but I do like some of the contrast of the bordered one. Maybe if you darkened the profile lines of the first one? Great stuff!
  ShayLei95 weeks ago
  kgullholman Thanks for the comment and the criticism. I definitely considered how the flammable sign might be taken as a funky Walt hairdo (which he could rock regardless!) but looking at the design without it just didn't look right to me after awhile so I left it in. Something about it felt more cohesive to me.
  heyboova & bufkin Thanks! I hope it's chosen.
  Rhymo Thank you for the suggestions on the previous design, but if you scroll down a little further you'll find my reworked/submitted design. I hope you like it as much as the pic in my original post!
  FreshTaDeath95 weeks ago
  This shirt looks really good all your versions of it! personally I liked the second one the best but I do like the addition of the color in your final one.