"
GA on hold
The article looks good. Nicely written, interesting information, and some funny comments by critics (Does Robert Christgau like ANYTHING?) but I have a few concerns.

- ""Listeners were not overtly impressed by ""The Girl Is Mine"", and thought that Jackson's Thriller would also be a disappointment."" Wait, was this the first single off the album?

- ""They added that will.i.am had put a ""breezy spin"" on the track and that the song's omission of McCartney ""did not suffering a bit because of it"".[29]"" did not suffering?

I will give you seven days to address these concerns. Then I will definitely pass this article. Thanks and good luck!   "