There are still problems - not yet ready for prime-time 

The following list is just SOME of the problems that you should have caught by proofreading carefully. It is not my job to proofread for you. Some of these problems I even noted before, but they still weren't fixed. These are easy fixes - please take the time to do it right.

He was subject to a well-traveled and intellectual frame-work early in his life. - poor wording and grammar
Expanded description - does not make sense as a section title
The questions were non utility of many specify characters, - - poor wording and grammar
Elizabeth J. barns - capitalize last name
The Early Carer of George John Romanes - misspelled