Kammala jumla mai zuwa: Abin da Robert Begiebing ya ce game da maganganun Mailer da kuma salon a "Miami da Siege na Chicago", littafinsa na tsawon littafin na
Taron 'yan jam'iyyar Democrat na 1968, za a iya cewa "Red Light". Begiebing ya bayyana cewa Mailer "ba ya shawo kan masu karatu kamar yadda ya shafe su tare, fiye da yarjejeniya / rashin yarda, a cikin cataracts na prose. Doguwar jerin bayanai, jerin abubuwa masu saurin canzawa, abubuwan ban mamaki, zane-zane masu sauri da bayyanawa, da kuma sautunan sauti duk suna kan nuni. " J. Michael Lennon ya maimaita Begiebing ta hanyar lura cewa zane-zanen halayen Mailer na adadi kamar Goldwater da Eisenhower "masu tsauri ne, marasa gafara, kuma sun buga alamar".