Waihangahia tētahi putanga matatini ake o tēnei rerenga kōrero i whakahaua e Pemberton a William W. Loring ki te tuku i ngā ope mai i te rohe ki te tonga o te raina, i reira i iti noa iho ai te whai wāhi ki te whakaeke kore whai hua a McClernand, hei whakapakari i te Hill.
Ko te tikanga, ko te putanga matatini ake o te rerenga korero ko "I whakahaua e Pemberton a William W. Loring ki te tuku i nga ope mai i te rohe tonga o te raina (i reira i iti noa iho te whakaeke ki te whakaeke kore a McClernand) ki te whakakaha i te Hill, engari i paopao a Loring, i kii he kaha o te Uniana ki tona aroaro. "