Story: Vous avez tous saisi vos repères sur la scène épouvantable, un homme boiteux au loin brisé et détruit des voitures s'étirant autour. Quelqu'un repère une figure dans une fenêtre. L'homme est las des étrangers. Certains choisissent d'approcher certains choisissent de regarder autour. Un avion passe au-dessus avec une turbine et fume.
Laisse-le savoir.
Les objectifs peuvent être assez petits. Vos descriptions du mouvement des personnages à certains moments peuvent très bien de longues phrases sur la fouille à travers le bureau à déplacer une chaise et assis.
Ne sois pas une bite.
Soyez aussi descriptif que possible sur les choses qui comptent, pas l'odeur de la pièce à rester que nous n'entrerons jamais ni ne reverrons.
Comment écrire :
- Pour les actions. Description dans cette couleur aussi.
- Pour des pensées.
- Pour des mots à voix haute.
- Pour le commentaire de l'OOC.
- Pour des choses aléatoires?
Name: Roger Davis.
Age: 18.
Height: 5'6".
Weight: 152lbs.
Occupation: Unemployed.
Bio: Roger Davis is a young man fresh out of high school looking for belonging. He has a chill personality and is pretty smart. In fact his grades were good, very good. He could have gone to college but he didn't have the money. Maybe he would if not for having tragically lost his parents to a car accident when he was 5(I know cliche, sue me.). Most of his friends went on to college, leaving him on his own for the most part. In times of need he reaches out to his previous Foster parents who he still calls frequently. He recently moved to , in search of a job. He is without luck though as every office he applies for has turned him down. This repetitive failure has wore his mental ability to the lowest point he's ever encountered. Upon hearing this his Foster parents decided he should come back for a while. Because of his financial situation he sold his car and decided to take the bus.... You know what happens.
Sorry I'm keeping it short not much time to spare right this second.